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[Holiday 0]

Hi.

Erst einmal vielen dank liebe Pick-up community! Seit nun eineinhalb Wochen gehe ich glücklich Pick-up betreiben.

Man das macht echt spaß.

Kurz zu mir, weil dies mein erstes Thema ist. Ich bin 19, studiere Design, bin nen kreativer und glücklich.

Kurz zu euch. Ihr seid einfach geil.

Nun zum Thema: ich hatte ne weile zugfahrt, weshalb ich zu meinen "kreativen Buch" griff um in meine Welt abzutauchen.

Dort kam es zu einer kleinen Geschichte, die ich nun a ma veröffentlichen will. Vielleicht gefällt sie euch. Vielleicht wollt ihr sie ergänzen.

Ob sie fertig ist weiß ich noch nicht.

Achja, sie ist auf Englisch... viel erfolg.

Sentence for sentence my hand shall obey,

last night it went on, I went for a lay

Two looks in the mirror, and one to my shoes,

tonight I'll take home, a new girl as a muse.

I open the door, and close as I go.

I open my mind, to create a new show.

"Hi, I am the man, you've been lookin for."

"Would you like to see, my bedroom door?"

Some Opener's made up, for the rest of the night.

My look is trendy - and god!, I feel tight.

Now what shall be, the first thoughts of thee?

Question not answered, because then there was SHE.

An HB ten,

for the most of us men.

Never Beauty was so scary,

Nor was a girl, I imagined to mary.

Three seconds went by.

Oh shit... I felt shy.

Where was the rule, I decided to use?

And where was the Life, I considered to choose?

A pick-up made living,

long nights, filled by taking and giving.

But now with her taking, my mind far away,

where should I get power, for the very next day?

Back to the rules, I went for a "Hey".

One look in my eyes, and -"There will be no lay."

Oh shit she knew, what me was wanting to say.

So this girl was a beauty turnin things grey.

Back to the game,

I got rid of the shame.

"I don't want, what you call a -Lay-!"

-"So what... I don't want you to stay."

Oohh fuck, c'mon there must be a way!

Or wait! My hope gave an answer: maybe she's gay!

Yeah that sounds right, but I gotta find out.

I have to get rid, of that mindfucking doubt.

With my body walking, and my eyes lookin at her,

I opened my mouth for an question to answer.

But before I started to mention,

she gave me detention.

One simple word, this beauty called -"no"

and gone it was, my own written show.

Now me was scared,

of a girl I had dared.

My feelings started hurting like back with One-itis.

Now please be regretfull and tell me what this's!

Your Holiday

[Lickin' 13]

Hi.

Erst einmal vielen dank liebe Pick-up community! Seit nun eineinhalb Wochen gehe ich glücklich Pick-up betreiben.

Man das macht echt spaß.

Kurz zu mir, weil dies mein erstes Thema ist. Ich bin 19, studiere Design, bin nen kreativer und glücklich.

Kurz zu euch. Ihr seid einfach geil.

GEIL ! Endlich mal was kreatives im "Creativ Room" !!!!!!!!

Die Liebe des MOD sei Dir unendlich*1, versprochen !

THOMAS | MOD

*1= means: 'til you do some things you don't have to do in this forum !

[Holiday 0]

Dann werd ich versuchen deine Liebe zu erwiedern